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Things to change:
- Add context to characters
- Stabilisation of shaky footage + re-shoot scenes of TV with tripod
- Straighten framing of TV (accidental dutch)
- Frame shots over graveyard with a high angle to avoid seeing the houses behind
- Costume
- Smarter
- Funeral-ish
- Simon
- White Shirt
- Suit trousers
- Orange trainers
- Scarf
- Bring flowers to grave
- Take additional footage of stairs on different locations + edit so hop between each
- Edit entrance to bedroom so it is more obvious what they are about to do
- Make it more visible the push onto the bed
- Reshoot stair scene - lighting + blurry
- Reshoot kitchen
- Add kitchen clutter
- Framing
- Rule of thirds
- More food
- Lighting
- Change outfits
- Different colors
- Remove chairs (only 2)
- different drink to water
- Color
- Different colour jackets
- Not just black
- Argument scene
- He grabs her
- Looks ashamed
- she leaves
- tightens i on arm grab
- Slap
- Add tightly framed close up
- Slow-mo
- More vignettes
- Some physical intimacy
- "Skin on skin" lyric
- Her checking his phone
- Walk through park
