AUDIENCE FEEDBACK: Narrative Rushes + Performance Rough Cut

Narrative rushes:
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Feedback:

• realistic
• Worked for the audience
• some shots were blurry
• didnt really make sense with graveyard
• liked the table scene although lighting was bad
• good continuity
• shot of TV was shaky 
• lighting was different for different shots
• last take at the end was too long and shaky 
• story makes little sense

Performance rough cut:
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Feedback:

• sometimes takes were too long 
• costume was realistic
• facepaint was weird
• different shots had different lighting 
• more enthusiasm for bassist
• ELS was cool when they switched postition
• costumes were good
• singer's singing was convincing
• liked the overlaying of the singer on top of the drumming
• some shots of the guitar solo was a bit off
• some syncing of singing shots were off

Performance Cut 1 - No VFX + Rough

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What needs to be changed:

• Colour correction on all garage scenes to adjust for lighting and camera issues
• Masking and finishing scene from 0100 to 0114
• Cleaning up takes that are slightly off beat
• Stabilisation of shaky clips
• Utilise more of footage from outdoor shoot later in video

Dark scenes black and white:
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Whole video black and white:
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SAMPLE SCENE: Performance

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What went well:

• Quickly get many shots, cast were very cooperative 
• Have good variety of static and dynamic shots 

Things to improve:

• Look at the shots with a more critical eye
• Have more shots of every single instrument on the drum kit
• Have drummer be more precise and energetic 
• Get go pro POV shots 
• Especially Guitar and Bass
• Spend more time to get a larger variety of shots 
• Have singer be more energetic 

Reflection:

• Re shoot and spend more time in general on every aspect 
• Plan better to know exactly which shots to take  

Audience Feedback:

• Have band coming in on stage and setup "behind the scenes"
• Busking implemented in to narrative?