Rough Cut 8

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What I have changed since the last rough cut:

1. Stabilisation of shots

2. Cross cutting between stair shot at the end

3. Zoom out transitions on drops

4. Added takes to make shots more dynamic and help verisimilitude

5. Removed blurry footage of digger 

6. Moved beginning of some shots to the end of a lyric 

7. Slomo added on most narrative 

8. Added more performance to break up narrative 

9. Color corrected graveyard scene to be black and white 

10. Moved small sections of layering or removed it 

11. Made section where the lead singer joins girl at grave longer to make a larger impact on audience 

Corrections to be made:
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